Hey Albert. just in terms of value, #1 and 3 work the best. Values on others are very spotty. I see individual highlight rather than whole mass. Also on the last one. Left side hill repeats in the distance. Same size and same angle. ALso the smoke that come out from chimney are exactly same angle they even have same distance among them. what out for those. Here is another homework. Follow exactly what I did on the demo. I want you to copy my demo not just composition and value, also the edges. Hang in there, Albert. I saw your improvement on your sketches. I', gonna push you like hell right now, otherwise you won't get better fast enough. post after the class with Jeff tomorrow again. I'll pick the color one you can work,. Thanks
Hey Albert. just in terms of value, #1 and 3 work the best. Values on others are very spotty. I see individual highlight rather than whole mass. Also on the last one. Left side hill repeats in the distance. Same size and same angle. ALso the smoke that come out from chimney are exactly same angle they even have same distance among them. what out for those. Here is another homework. Follow exactly what I did on the demo. I want you to copy my demo not just composition and value, also the edges. Hang in there, Albert. I saw your improvement on your sketches. I', gonna push you like hell right now, otherwise you won't get better fast enough. post after the class with Jeff tomorrow again. I'll pick the color one you can work,. Thanks
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