He Ryan I fixed the pose and silhouette littlebit. Make sure she has strong femal silhouette. Also, try some lighting based on the magic light on her hands. Also, I rearranged the skull little bit. For the environment piece, Let's start putting people in there and detail on the wall looks a lot better. go stronger on the sunset so the time of the day feels bright afternoon.
following jeff's paintover. I'm liking it more now.