hey Susie. hh I really like the idea that we can't see his face. for next set, come up with little stronger gesture and pose, also play with different body type. Put him in really fat body as well as kinda skiny and tall, even make him dwarfs in some variations. In these stages, you want to show in your drawing that you thought of lot of different possibilities. Again, clothing idea, differnt hat variations are all pretty neat.!!