Hey Susie. bottom left color thumbnail works great. awesome value and lighting is very convincing. like the last one too. i don' t think the final color has strong mood and lighting as those 2. Maybe the sky is too big and open? Caterpuilar needs stronger gesture and silhouette. Let me paintover little so you can work on tomorrow after Lim's class. Train looks good now let's add hot spot as focal point. Mad hatter thumbs are nice. LEt's mak sure his hat stands out not just by size but by the unique shape rather strog shape.