Thursday, July 31, 2014

Albert


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  1. Hey ALbert. painting got little more organized. Great to see that. Now I can see you try to have clear edges to all of the shapes. It's better than to be soft. Now, it's time to go back and soften some edges. Just be selective about the edges that your are making. You still have to work a lot on the composition ,value and color. But you should never practice the all separate. Now the biggest issue I have here is your focal point. When you are putting characters like that small in the composition, it is not wise choice to make them as primary focal point. Have something in there more interesting. not necesarily putting some UFo in the middle. Even the way you treat the waterfall texture or how the water is forming against that tree and stuff.

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