First painting looking good susie, few notes. Let's tighten up the face area little more. Let's give more depth on screen right side. Be clear about the holes on the top wher elight is traveling through. clean them up little. Can you bring moree bounce light on the hookas on screen left and also screen right fore ground? Other than those, it look nice. Wecond one youo need more delicate touch, Go really detail and high on texture frequency on this one. Almost treat it like 3d model but you're just painting on it.