much better on the first environment painting. lighting reads so much better too. Now you need to define entire picture maintaining the color and value. Can you plz make the cast shadow on the columns different? Cast shadow on the right side is too high anyway considering the direction of your light. Let's come up with better silhouette on the right foreground. Shita is loosing her silhouette. I just see the orange dot in front of dark background. Overall, Let's bring some more flowers and plants in this place. On the last one, I need to see more progress to give you color advice but I like the composition on black and white better where the head is lying on the ground and receiving the light.
much better on the first environment painting. lighting reads so much better too. Now you need to define entire picture maintaining the color and value. Can you plz make the cast shadow on the columns different? Cast shadow on the right side is too high anyway considering the direction of your light. Let's come up with better silhouette on the right foreground. Shita is loosing her silhouette. I just see the orange dot in front of dark background. Overall, Let's bring some more flowers and plants in this place. On the last one, I need to see more progress to give you color advice but I like the composition on black and white better where the head is lying on the ground and receiving the light.
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